Hi! I haven't type anything on my blog for few months already! Here is my new Poem! Enjoy!Do give me some comments! Title : Our Earth
There’s a part of our Earth we call Desert.
With so little water but lots of cactus.
The sands move like silk
Over hill after hill.
That’s the amazing place we call Desert.
There’s a part of our Earth we call Pole.
It’s so freezing it makes you shout “Oh!”.
But how cold are the floes,
Penguins, bears don’t feel cold?
That’s the most frigid place we call Pole.
There’s a part of our Earth we call Sky.
You just can’t imagine how wide.
Birds are flying over there,
Clouds are moving everywhere
In this extremely peaceful place we call Sky.
There’s a part of our Earth we call Ocean.
Which has a huge sea life ‘population’.
Waves are climbing up and down,
Fish and coral all surround.
That’s the wonderland we call Ocean.
4 comments:
Great effort shown at the choice of rhyming words despite a couple of minor grammatical mistakes.
Well done, Kim Fung.
You should share it with your classmates, English teacher as well as your Geography teacher. Have you told them about your blog?
So far, we have much unpleasant side of our earth. But your poem highlights the amazing beautiful side of it.
I think this is the power of this poem of yours.
Uncle Phot, Khon Kaen
Thank you Miss Cheung and Uncle Phot for your comments, I'm really glad to see them!! Thank you!
I didn't share it with my classmates. But Henry, Cindy and some of my relatives know my blog. Hope they will read my writings on this blog!
I'm surprised that you can write this poem. It's relaxing to read. I really like it! :)
Keep going, Kim Fung.
Miss Chan
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